hm, that 'she´s mine by law' sounds awfully as if he´s considering hotaru his property - something she´d have a problem with, i´m sure. that girl is the epitome of a free spirit!
on a side note, may i suggest that you add a character page? you know, a 'who is who' of the main people, who is allied with whom, and maybe a few basic facts about vamps and your verse in general - that would make it easier for new readers
We do have a character page. You can find it on our main website here. And we also have an About Eternity page that goes over the basic plots and interests of the major characters. I should either link it more often or add one over here on Comic Fury. That's a good idea.
on a side note, may i suggest that you add a character page? you know, a 'who is who' of the main people, who is allied with whom, and maybe a few basic facts about vamps and your verse in general - that would make it easier for new readers
Yeah, Kurt's had some better ideas in his life...