how do you draw a heart that is ceasing to beat?
Rushing these things gets messy! This is why we take our time at dinner. *tsk tsk*
In the span of one page Hotaru has died and come back to life--err... life-ish. Life 2.0. She's undergoing the internal modifications now. Thus the screaming. Ya know... vampire birth stuff.
I think you did a very effective job.
Insta-fangs? Is that how the turning process works here?
Haters gonna hate.